2011山西在职研究生考试英语作文模版
第一步：写出开头段
模块1：两面型提出观点开头（转折法开头）
模板：It is widely accepted that ___________（主题）,_____________（名扩插入语，对这个主题进行一些修饰）, 谓语动词+扩展从句（有宾语可以使用定从，无宾语可以使用状从）However, others argue that___________（主题的近义词，避免与上一句重复）, more often than not （副词做插入语）, is harmful to the people _________
例如：工作压力是好事还是坏事？
It is widely accepted that pressure in work, forcefully imposed on the employees in this competitive world, can bring some positive results on the grounds that it can stimulate the staff immensely. However, others argue that stress, more often than not, is harmful to the people who cannot assume excessive pressure in their work.
模块2：果因型提出现象
Recently, one of the hottest (most controversial) topic/issue arousing general concern is that ___________（主题）,_____________（名扩插入语，对这个主题进行一些修饰），谓语＋宾语＋定从。In my opinion, there are several factors responsible for this (phenomenon, increase, situation, problem…….)
Recently, one of the hottest (most controversial) topic arousing general concern is that stress, more often that not, is harmful to the employees who cannot assume excessive pressure. It is no simply task to identify the negative ef.fects of this phenomenon which involves several complicated factors./ In my opinion, there are several factors responsible for this problem.
模块3：
Nowadays, mounting attention has been turned to the___________（主题）, _____________（名扩插入语，对这个主题进行一些修饰Therefore it is high time that measures were taken to prevent this.
Nowadays, mounting attention has been turned to the high pressure in work, invariably brought to everyone in this competitive world. The immediate consequence is the damage of individual employee’s health. The longer-range result can be a decline in physic for the whole workforce since this problem has become more evident in each working unit. Therefore it is high time that measures were taken to prevent this.
第3步：写出最后段
模块5：两面型结尾：
As the proverb says “No garden is without its weed”. ________ (形容词) to some extent as ___________is（as的倒装句）, I still advocate ______________(自己的观点).
例如：
Essential to some extent as work pressure is（as的倒装句）, I still advocate reducing it by efforts.
模块6：因果型结尾
From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that __________(主题)。We must call for an immediate action, because the current situation of (主题) _____________, permitted to continue, will surely lead to the end/destruction/damage of/to ______./
或This situation/tendency will surely continue that it deserves more intensive research and public concern.
模块7：How型结尾
Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success/solution, but the pay-off might be worth the effort. It will help/benefit/contribute to_____________(效果) eventually.
第三环节：写作环节
模块8：中间第2段
But according to me, I firmly hold that its negative effect overweighs its benefits for the following reasons或work strain is more devastating than beneficial. First, too much pressure can damage employee’s health.（简单句） It is the decline in health that in return produces a negative effect on the work.（强调句） For example, due to the high pressure in work, a prominent journalist died on his way to interview a scholar, which is a tragedy and loss of the whole country （例证句）.
模块9：中间第3段
Besides, the enthusiasm of the staff can be quenched if they are exposed to overwhelming stress. Virtually, only by the love of one’s career, rather than the external pressure, can the employee be driven to accomplish the tasks in work as quickly and as well as possible. (倒装句)
模块10：中间第4段
Finally, a strained mind of the employee may reduce their efficiency in work, the most important factor to improve the output for each working unit.(n1,+ n2+名扩)
第四部分 例文
Do we need a shopping centre near the community?
It is generally accepted or rather taken for granted that a shopping centre, as the indispensable place for shopping, should locate on prosperous shopping streets. However, I maintain that we need a shopping centre not only confined to shopping streets but built near the community for the following reasons.
To begin with, a shopping centre near the community can well offer life necessities and convenience to dwellers. Suppose if you have little time for shopping in the supermarket which you must spend much more time on reaching, the shopping centre at this moment can be the most convenient. Provided the weather changes, you are hungry, then you can also turn to the shopping centre for the sake of convenience.
Furthermore, with the rapid improvement of city inhabitants’ living standard, they are increasingly eager to living in an enjoyable even perfect environment. This requirement objectively calls for the perfection of the community. Modern community should be a whole entity including such functions as education, health, leisure, service and entertainment. Based on this point of view, a shopping centre as a service facility attached to the community is vital or crucial both for people and the all-around development of the community.
Through the above-mentioned analysis, we have no difficulties in drawing the conclusion—we need a shopping centre near the community for the convenience brought to us and the future development of our community.